Monday 21 March 2016

Here is my story

The legend of the golden arrow (part One)


Once then was a small village. In that small village was a hay house. A boy not just any boy it was jack and he was an archer.
He was on a quest.
The quest for the golden arrow he had just started and he need help so he went to the town.
He needed a new bow and some arrows.
Then he went to the blacksmith “WHAT CAN I GET YOU” he boomed
“I will have ten palm arrows,” he asks
“OK” He boomed
“FOUR SILVER AND ONE GOLD” he boomed so he gave him the coins and got the arrows.
“THE PALM ARROWS don’t hurt but bleed,” he said in his head.
jack had a journal and capped track on all the enemies stealth, weakness.
As jack was walking down the gravel road he saw a theft.
(The theft is a class that you can choose).
Stealing gold coins off a woman without thinking he draws back his bow and shot a palm wood arrow right in the back “OW WHAT THE” then the theft draws two dagger to his throat “WHAT THE heck I WAS TALK TO HER!!!!!!!!”  
“sorry” jack says in a wiper
“you better be “ then he mores the two dagger back into the ripped leather holders
“HEY jack yelled do you want to team up?”
“and whey wood I want to?”
“you and me we could make a good team”
“FINE” the theft yelled
“what's your name”
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2 comments:

  1. Hi Miller, I loved your story it is very well written I enjoined it and I would love to see more cool story's from you in the future.

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    1. thank you for the great question I get on it

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