Tuesday, 11 April 2017
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great slide presentation miller, jack and jack but to make it better you could make sure your background is visible to your peace of writing like you could highlight it a color so you can see the words
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Hey Miller, it's Renae
ReplyDeleteIt think that the facts on your slideshow was very interesting, It's sad how many things get affected by plastic, Just remember your spelling,
cheers Renae
awesome miller jack and jack but to be BTB for next time double check your spelling
ReplyDeleteyou should put more on it its really good thou
ReplyDeleteHi Miller Sammi here.
ReplyDeleteI thought your presentation was really cool. Next time make sure you check your spelling and Punctuate it a bit more.
Hi this is a great slide I like how you have lots of information of all the animals. To be BTB you might want to make all the words visible and make sure the words are correct thanks.
ReplyDeletehi lochie here i think its amazizing and i think you could improve by putting more info
ReplyDeleteyours very truly
lochie
Hi Miller.
ReplyDeleteI liked your presentation but at parts it was hard to read it with your backgrounds and you spelled plastic plastid. And you also forgot to put full stops in places and you wrote I in lowercase when it was meant to be a capital.
Kia ora Miller, Jack H and Jack B. You have taught me something new. I think that your information about land based mammals eating plastic from the sea makes perfect sense. When we were thinking about the waste problem in the ocean we kept focussing on sea birds and marine creatures. Boar are scavengers and would look for food on the beaches. To improve your presentation you need to update it with first hand experiences from Fiji.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Mr McAulay
Hi Miller Its Caitlan here
ReplyDeleteyou need to change the colour of the text on some of the slides because yous were having trouble reading it and people visting your blog wont be able to read it
check out my blog at paroagreycaitlanw.blogspot.co.nz
thanks Caitan
Miller,Jack B and Jack h is a bit hard to read the first side please change the text coulor
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